Thursday, March 31, 2011

The Haunted House

`                                               The Haunted House
Ding dong the door bell rang as I was getting on my black high heeled boots. With a thud and a jump I ran out the door.  
          “Hi Chrissie!”I exclaimed.
          “Hi Rose,” she replied.
 “Are we ready to go get freaked out!”
“Of course I am, that’s why we’re going,” she said in a sassy voice.
          “Let’s go,” I called.“So are you doing anything tonight because maybe we could have a sleep over?” Chrissie asked.
          “Um, I think so it just depends on how tired I am tonight.”
          “Ok,” she replied.
Together we ran out of the car and we were going thru the entrance when I felt this feeling unspeakable a feeling like something bad was going to happen. A feeling like I was doing the wrong thing, like I would be hurt. But it was too late I was being pulled in by my best friend Chrissie, at least I had her.
“Ok 5 bucks” the lady in a deep black shirt said.
“Um ok 5 bucks” I handed the lady the money and me and Chrissie strolled off into the deep darkness of the haunted house.
“Ahhhhh!” we screamed as we hugged each other trying to hide our fear.
Running ahead, the feeling came back, that deep dark feeling.
“I-I got to go!” I ran and ran past the things we screamed at.
“Wait where!” but it was too late I was stuck in one place and I couldn’t break away. With fear dripping out of my heart a ghost started talking.
“So do you think you can just run away?” the ghost said in a threatening voice.
“Yes,” I answered shaking in my boots.
“Stomp her!” her he yelled as another ghost appeared.
“If you can’t love us and have fun in this haunted house then go!”
“Chrissie,” I yelled. “Chrissie!”  No reply.
Then the floor started to break and the wood was falling under my feet. My heart was drenching with fear and I didn’t know what to do it was just far too late for me to be saved.
“Where am I, where am I?” I yelled.
“Why you’re in Ghost Haunts.”
This ugly skinny guy came walking out of the woods with a head shaped like a crown and shoes like bananas.
“Hi,” I exclaimed in the most polite voice.
“My name is Rose.”
“Oh, hi my name is Rarar.” He answered.
“Let’s take a walk in the woods,” he said in the most unbarring way.
“Ok.”
“So do you even have a place to stay here?” Rarar questioned.“You can stay at the Queens castle.”
“Ok” I said.
“She’s really nice she’ll give you a whole apartment.” he explained
“Tell me about your land?” I asked.
“This land is not as dreadful as you may think. It’s just the witch’s lands that we’re on right now. She’s the one that named the town, Ghost Haunts. We’re walking to our side of the land which is colorful and happy. But in two days we have to have the right person to defeat the witch.
“That sounds easy!” I answered.
“Oh but its not,” replied Rarar.
“Why?”
“She has powers as much as to equal three tons that’s what, 3,000 pounds.”
“Oh wow,” I answered maybe not!
Then we entered this big beautiful circle of plants.
“There it is!” he exclaimed.
“Let’s go!”
“Hi your majesty my name is rose.
“What a beautiful name,” the Queen said delightfully.
“Do you need a hotel to stay in?”
“I guess your majesty, but I would rather go home.”
“Where’s your home?” the Queen said.
“Virginia.”
“If you say so, I’ll take you to a magical tube that will take you home.”
“But for now you must stay in your hotel for tonight.”
“Ok.”

Taken up by her to my hotel I thought why didn’t I turn around? Sure this Queen is nice but I can’t stay here of course I would be going home tomorrow I hope.  



                           In the morning
“Wake up,” I heard a voice. “Ahh I slept so good,” I answered.
“I bet you did do you still want to go home?” she asked.
“Yes!” I replied.
“Here’s is a ball gown to remember me.  Why don’t you put it on?”
“Ok,” I slipped it on and felt the sparkles all around it. I felt like a princess.
 “Now I’ll take you to the magical tube where you want to go home.” We walked and walked and I finally saw the magical tube.
“Wait,” I exclaimed.
 “I can’t go home I have to defeat the witch for your kingdom!”
“What did you say?” asked the Queen.“I said I have to defeat the witch for you guys!” I said even louder so that everyone that was in the room could hear me.
“No no no honey,” said the Queen.
“Wait how do you know about the witch,” she asked!
“Rarar told me he said in two days the Queen has to choose the person who can fight the witch.” I answered.
“You really think you can?” she asked.
“You bet I can I’m going to give it my all.”
“Wait that’s tonight!” exclaimed the Queen.

Thud thud thud my heart was pounding fiercely as the witch stood face to face with me! Then the Queen pulled me aside.
“The secret to beating her up is to hit her 3 times that’s what all witches don’t know that I know, now go.”On your mark get set go! I whooshed to the speed of light and hit her with a sword.
“That’s one!” I sighed already tired.
Then 3 heavy weights fell from the sky when I moved out of the way just in time before they hit me. Hit hit hit I hit the witch when all of a sudden the 3 weights came down on me again and I was out on the ground. My brain went blank for a minute but I heard screaming go Rose! Go Rose! Right then and there I jumped up and reached as far as I could but I still couldn’t. Dripping sweat I gave it my all and snap she was dead. Then the deep dark woods turned into colored grounds!
“You did it Rose!” shouted everyone.
Then everyone took me to the tube. “Thank you so much everyone I wish I could stay but my best friend is waiting up in Virginia. You see the reason why I’m here is because I fell thru a haunted house and now I really have to go!”
“Bye!” everyone shouted. “Come visit again!”
“I doubt it though!” I exclaimed.“But thanks!”
“Chrissie” I shouted. “You’re here at my house!”
“Yes, but what happened?” she asked.
“We’ll talk about that later, but right now we have a sleep over to do!"

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